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《文勇的新托福写作手稿》

作者:刘文勇
出版社:中国人民大学出版社
出版时间:2015-7-14
页数:388页
书号:9787300210254
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附录--文书写作之“个人陈述”(16)

编辑:share 来源: 美联出国考试 发布时间:2016-07-20

文章摘要: 本文美联出国考试小编继续为大家整理了《文勇的新托福写作手稿》中的内容,此为附录--文书写作之“个人陈述”;本文主要介绍了优秀PS解析。

In the past several years, I have had thorough studies on theory and acquired skills, interned in various social agencies, been involved in a social network in Hong Kong, researched elderly and child migrants, and obtained the national qualification certificate to become a social worker. After all of these accumulated experiences, youth consultation and relevant family problem solving have finally become my primary interest. To broaden my horizon and keep pace with more advanced theories and practices of social work, I know I need to step out. I believe pursuing a Master’s degree at Boston College would grant me such a chance, and also offer me a profound insight into social work in America where the development in this field is much more advanced than in China. I would like to gain the following from my professional education. Firstly, I can acquire many new ideas from courses and literature, well-established or controversial, and discuss them with my classmates and brew brand-new ideas by brainstorm. Secondly, I wish to be involved in more internship experience. Despite my practice in my undergraduate years, I still need to do more so as to improve my social work skills. Besides, I hope to get more guidance during my social work practice because only reflection can make practice more valuable. Thirdly, I am interested in participating in research work. I like to do research by experimentation, rather than mere literature research. Fourthly, I would like to deepen my commitment to my values. Boston College, in my view, can offer me what I want. Firstly, BC aims to teach both professionally and academically. By participating in classes and activities, I surely can enhance my abilities in putting theory into practice and improve my self-reflection ability by guidance. Secondly, I share with BC in its social responsibilities of helping the underprivileged population, which is quite lacking in China. I want to feel this responsibility in the community of BC and strive to do more and do better. Thirdly, Master Program of Social work in BC also focuses on diversity. I am convinced that only in such an academic environment can I be exposed to more tolerating academic atmosphere and diverse values and cultivate fertile mind.

I have two goals. One is to become a professional social worker both in research and practice. The other is to intervene independently in youth growth, especially the developmental work for youth, intervention for high-risk youth and family guidance. I sincerely believe that systematic study and social experience at Boston College can turn me into a truly qualified social worker. I will become a more professional social worker and, with my knowledge and skill, I can help those who are in trouble, confusion or need, just like what I did years ago, to accompany them walk through the tough period.

背景说明

托福:88;

GRE:无;

GPA:3.2/4.0

录取学校:波士顿大学俄亥俄州立大学

英文成文:邓乔楠老师

简单点评:

正如我们反复强调的一样,写任何一套文书之前,首先自己心里要有一个概念——自己所申请的专业需要什么样的素质和能力,不论自己的理解是否正确,都在心里要有一个想法,如果不确定自己的想法是否合理,那么多去看一看美国学校的官网,看看它们希望我们是怎样的申请者。——这个步骤,别人可以引导,但是最终的决定权在自己。因为每个人对每个专业的理解并不完全一致,每个人不同的阅历和经历在某种程度上决定了每个人对这个问题不同的理解。

我们选取的是其中申请Boston College用到的文章,对该文章的主人来说,她认为社工需要真诚,需要不断的反思,她说这是最基本的,在这个基础之上才是技巧,有了这个基础,学到了技巧,然后就是不断地付诸实践(practical experience),不断地进行深入的研究(research),唯有此才能成为一名合格的社会工作人员。因此很显然本文即是用了这种思路和方法:她有真诚并有真诚陪伴的案例为证;她有反思意识也有案例佐证;她做了一些实践和研究并且选出了对自己受益最多的重点描述;整篇读来,她有人品、有能力、有专业背景,舍她其谁?

于是,这在很大程度上弥补了硬件条件不突出的软肋,帮助她申请到了理想的学校。

当然,其他的社工专业的申请者,你们可以有你们自己对社工不同的理解,不求千篇一律,但求人人拥有独立思考之能力。每个优秀的PS的诞生都不是一蹴而就的,都是经历过若干次的思考、讨论、修改后出土的。惟愿每位申请者都能多思考,多下苦功夫。

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