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UIUC和威廉玛丽学院LLM专业奖学金申请案例分享

编辑:乐闻携尔 来源: 乐闻携尔 发布时间:2016-07-15

文章摘要: 下面是中国矿业大学的杨同学经过努力,成功申请UIUC和威廉玛丽学院LLM专业奖学金申请案例分享。

学生背景

姓名:Y同学(女)

就读学校:中国矿业大学

专业:法学

TOEFL:93

GPA:Overall GPA: 3.2 Major GPA: 3.47 Junior Year GPA: 3.49/5

申请专业:LLM

录取学校:
    伊利诺伊大学厄巴纳-香槟分校(UIUC)【综合排名41】—奖学金$25000
    威廉玛丽(College of William Mary)【综合排名32】—奖学金$5000

专业顾问点评

这是一个普通的孩子,不同的是她的童年,也因此这个不同寻常的童年变成了PS的开头,同学们不妨一读(非最终稿,但是可窥一斑):

Since an early age, I knew that I was different. Because a minor hereditary disease caused my capillary blood vessels to extend right under my skin, my hand looked quite different. The influence of the disease to me was mainly emotional as it did not hinder any of my physical abilities. I just had to bear with the staring and the idea that I was different. My friends would not play with me because they joked that I had a terrible contagious disease; In P.E. class, nobody would hold my hands. The feeling of being left out made me become sensitive. Luckily, my very wise mother knew the importance of building my confidence and introduced piano into my life. To prove that my hands were normal, I practiced hard with them. In seven years, I passed the highest level Piano Test. Gaining confidence in the process, I started to open up to others. The many tests and performances on stage fostered my character, too. They taught me to enjoy challenges, stick to my goals and be willing to demonstrate my strengths. As I grew older, I could calmly explain why my hands look different with a smile on my face without feeling ashamed. But this experience enabled me to identify with the weak and underprivileged. Sympathizing with their experiences, I am ready to extend a helping hand. The best way for me to fulfill this wish is through studying law.

【携尔留学】一句话总结:如果我们普通的不能再普通,我们做的就是周围同学做的,我们想的就是周围同学想的,那么换个角度来切入,或许就柳暗花明了!

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